More and more working on this

Am I the only one that is struggling with this??

I brainstormed some more and came up with these:

These are my spreads for the actual book stores. I am really happy with them and how they get more grungy as they go on. I want to know what my teacher thinks so.

I really need to get a move on and work on my covers, introduction page and my chosen page. I have no idea what to do for my chosen page!